Amanda's Comments

1. http://ff20132.blogspot.co.nz/2013/03/mollys-fan-fiction-plan.html

"This has really captivated my imagination... it's so mysterious and thrilling! This storyline has a lot of interesting possibilities, can't wait to see what path you take!"

2. http://ff20132.blogspot.co.nz/2013/03/gemmas-fan-fiction-draftplan.html

"Fantastic story Gemma, I found it incredibly engaging and entertaining. And I also agree with Leigh and Shelah, just needs the grammar fixed and it'll be perfect!"

3. http://ff20132.blogspot.co.nz/2013/03/shelahs-fan-fiction-draftplan.html

"Absolutely adorable story Shelah, a great pleasure to read, it's humorous and very entertaining. You write in such a way that the reader can visualise everything so vividly. I especially love the ending. Perfect spelling and grammar. Well done!"

4. http://ff20132.blogspot.co.nz/2013/03/tamas-fan-fiction-draftplan.html

"Excellent poem. I like how it already sets the slightly sinister and off-beat feel of your plot. I can't agree more with Shelah, I too love the psychological dark side of Alice in Wonderland and the deep seated feeling of unease and that all is not as it should be. The fantastic visual nature of Alice in Wonderland seems to lend itself to being used as metaphors for drug use, hallucination and psychological uncertainty... I think this has the potential to be a brilliant story, can't wait to read it!"

5. http://ff20132.blogspot.co.nz/2013/03/jerry-changs-fan-fiction-draftplan.html

"This sounds fascinating, a really good idea... Not sure where the story is going but it's obviously still in the early stages... Look forward to seeing how you develop it."